Could you please correct my text ?


我的职业 是律师。

律师 的责任很大,因为他必须解决严重得实情。然后压力大。

可是在巴黎 律师逐渐增加。 因此招聘越来越少。

The a versions are acceptable I'm told. 2 needed no changes.

  1. 虽然我会说一口流利的法语,但是我想说一口流利的汉语。(illogical 虽然。。。但是。。。)
    1a. 我已经会说一口流利的法语,我希望我的汉语能像我的法语一样流利。
  2. 我的职业是律师。
  3. 律师的责任很大,因为他必须解决严重得实情。然后压力大。
    3a. 作为律师,我的压力很大,责任很重,因为律师总得解决严重的事情。
  4. 可是在巴黎 律师逐渐增加。 因此招聘越来越少。
    4a. 在巴黎律师的数量越来越多,因此工作机会越来越少。
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    Little tip on 4a: 的数量 could be removed, 'cause 律师起来越多 implies the increment of the quantities of lawyers. – xbh Aug 12 at 15:51
  • You're right! I didn't see that. Brevity is best! – Pedroski Aug 12 at 23:25
  • so this is an chinese native who answer you – J.Wang Sep 12 at 11:14







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