I'm trying to say this in English:
I am almost enjoying imagining the poor men who listen to these suggestions, ...
The context is peacocking: Peacocking means dressing for attention; just like peacocks use their feathers to get a mate. My character is researching these "pick up" techniques online, and she's imagining someone using "peacocking", believing it's a good idea, but look ridiculous in other peoples' eyes.
And this is what I've come up with:
I don't think it's very good, though. I showed my teacher this a while back, but she struggled with it. I don't think it's an easy sentence.
Question: How do I correct 我几乎在享受中想象着听这样建议的可怜的男人?