I’m hoping for your help translating this song. The video already has a translation, but I’m trying to translate word for word for learning purposes. I’ve gotten most of it thanks to Google translate/Yabbla, but I’m still missing some words (shown as ? below). I think I may have also made some mistakes, as I had to guess at the right meaning sometimes.
I prefer to break down the words as much as possible — for instance, translating shiju as “poetry sentence” rather than “verse.” As a learner, this helps me learn more words. So if you see any places where there is more opportunity for that, or any other improvements, please let me know! Xie xie!
Video translation Pinyin My translation Want to fly low with you Xiang yao he ni dikong feixing want want with you low fly Collect oxygen with you everywhere He ni daochu shouji yangqi With you everywhere collect oxygen If you are foggy, you can’t see clearly Jiaru miwu ni kan bu qing if fog you see not clear It’s better to fall into my heart Buru zhui ru wo de xinli ? ? enter my [de] heart I want to take you from noisy to tranquility Xiang dai ni cong chaonao dao anning Want take you from noisy to quiet I want to take you from cloudy to sunny Xiang dai ni cong duoyun dao zhuan qing Want take you from cloudy to ? ? I want to organize my shirt for you Xiang yao wei ni zhengli chenyi Want want for you organize shirt Collect verses for you everywhere Wei ni daochu shouji shi ju For you everywhere collect poetry sentence It’s time to give you hot milk every night Youguole mei wan gei ni re niunai de shijian ? every night give you hot milk [de] time The bed also reads the movie we have not finished reading Chuang tou hai xiezhe women mei kan wan de yingpian Bed ? still ? we haven’t finished [de] movie. Are you still insomnia after the time of leaving Likai hou de shijian li ni shifou hai shimian Leave end [de] time ? you whether still insomnia I never stayed up late, I also obviously blackened my eyes (*what? I didn't understand this*) Cong bu ao ye de wo ye mingxian heile yanquan From not boil night [de] I also obviously blackened eye-socket The doll you sent is still with you Ni song de wan'ou yiran pei zai shenbian You sent [de] doll still ? located body-side Memory emerges from the beginning to the end and repeats itself Jiyi chuxian fuxian cong kaishi dao zhongdian Memory appears reappears from start to end I want to break into the forest with you and sneak into the sea Wo xiang he ni yiqi chuang jin senlin qianru haidi I want with you together rush in forest sneak sea I want to watch the sunrise to sunset with you Wo xiang he ni yiqi kan richu dao riluo tianchi I want with you together watch sunrise to sunset ? I want to fly with you through Greenwich and time (*what does this mean?*) Wo xiang he ni chuanguo gelinweishi he shijian feixing I want with you traverse Greenwich and time fly I want to see you, hug you through the church and the sea Wo xiang jian ni chuanguo jiaotang he ren hai yongbao ni I want see you, through church and ? sea hug you Passing the coffeeshop again Zai luguo na jia kafei dian Again ? ? the coffee shop Familiar and strange place Shuxi you mosheng di didian Familiar and strange of place Stop and hope that your figure will appear Zhuzu xiwang ni de shenying hui chuxian stop hope your body shadow will appear Sorry for not saying anything yet Hai mei shuo chukou de baoqian Still haven't said ? [de] sorry Promised promises with you Ceng he ni yueding de nuoyan Previously with you agree [de] promise Look up and close your eyes and let the tears flow in your heart Taitou bi yan rang lei liu jin xinli mian Lift head close eyes let tears flow in heart side