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Is anyone willing to help me edit this monologue for grammatical errors? If so, I would really appreciate it. I have also included the pinyin and english in case it helps to understand what I meant. I have chosen the most simple words I know to make performing it easier. Thank you.

我下课以后常常去我的实习。 我以后我的实习我有课一遍。 我的最后课六时完毕某些天, 八时其他天。 然后我常常开始我的回家作业。 至少有一次每个星期我有Amnesty International会议. 这是一个人权组我跟我的男朋友开始。 如果我有会议,我得回家作业我开始后。 我的奖学金需求五个课,所以我有课每天。 周末,我也很多了学习。 如果我有时间,我星期五试试玩儿跟我的朋友们,和星期日吃饭跟我的妈妈。 有时我恐怕没有时候。 如实, 我很忙和不能等到休息。 但是, 我有这些机会是很祝福。

Wǒ xiàkè yǐhòu chángcháng qù wǒ de shíxí. Wǒ yǐhòu wǒ de shíxí wǒ yǒu kè yībiàn. Wǒ de zuìhòu kè liù shí wánbì mǒu xiē tiān, bā shí qítā tiān. Ránhòu wǒ chángcháng kāishǐ wǒ de huí jiā zuòyè. Zhìshǎo yǒu yīcì měi gè xīngqí wǒ yǒu Amnesty International huìyì. Zhè shì yīgè rénquán zǔ wǒ gēn wǒ de nán péngyǒu kāishǐ. Rúguǒ wǒ yǒu huìyì, wǒ dé huí jiā zuòyè wǒ kāishǐ hòu. Wǒ de jiǎngxuéjīn xūqiú wǔ gè kè, suǒyǐ wǒ yǒu kè měitiān. Zhōumò, wǒ yě hěnduōle xuéxí. Rúguǒ wǒ yǒushíjiān, wǒ xīngqíwǔ shì shì wán er gēn wǒ de péngyǒumen, hé xīngqírì chīfàn gēn wǒ de māmā. Yǒu shí wǒ kǒngpà méiyǒu shíhòu. Rúshí, wǒ hěn máng hé bùnéng děngdào xiūxí. Dànshì, wǒ yǒu zhèxiē jīhuì shì hěn zhùfú.

After class I often go to my internship. After my internship I have class again. My final classes end at 6pm on somedays, and 8pm on other days. After, I often start my homework. Every week at least once a week I have Amnesty International meetings. This is a human rights organization that I started with my boyfriend. After I have a meeting, I start my homework. My scholarship requires me to take five classes, so I have class every day. On the weekends, I study a lot. If I have time, I try to go out with my friends on fridays and eat dinner with my mom on sunday. Usually I don't have time. Honestly, I am extremely busy and I can't wait till break. Yet, I am very blessed to have these opportunities.

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    Please don't repost questions: rather, you should edit to existing ones. This is an exact duplicate of this. – user5714 Nov 29 '15 at 21:54
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我下课以后常常去实习。 实习结束之后继续上课。 我的最后一节课有时下午六点结束,有时晚上八点结束。然后开始我的家庭作业。 每个星期我有至少有一次Amnesty International会议. 这是我跟我的男朋友建立(establish or join?)的一个人权组织。 如果有会议,会议结束后才开始家庭作业。 我的奖学金需要五门课,所以我每天有课。 周末,我也学习很多。 如果我有时间,星期五跟我的朋友们玩,星期天陪我的妈妈吃饭,但是经常没有时间。 的确, 我很忙,几乎没有休息。但是不管怎么说,我有这些机会还是心怀感激的。

  • I'd use 创建 instead of 建立 in 这是我跟我的男朋友建立的一个人权组织 – user58955 Oct 13 '14 at 15:18
  • 会议结束后才开始家庭作业 -> 会议结束后才开始家庭作业; 我的奖学金需要五门课 -> 我的奖学金需要我上五门课. To make it reads more smoothly, 星期五跟我的朋友们玩 -> 星期五会跟朋友们玩, 星期天陪我的妈妈吃饭 -> 星期天会陪妈妈吃饭 – user58955 Oct 13 '14 at 15:21
  • If you mean starting an Amnesty International club at your school to similar, I would use "社团." – Timothy Gu Oct 16 '14 at 0:34

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