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| May 17, 2022 at 15:25 | comment | added | NanningYouth | Chinese language is more flexible than English and other western languages. But there is still some work to be done for better reading. 看小说、学外语还有跟外国人聊天 is a better choice, 谢谢您的观看 is more natural than 感谢您的收看. 收看is a formal word often used to highlight the show to be watched, like an important event, and sounds a little awkward when what you like others to watch is a short video of your self-introduction. | |
| May 15, 2022 at 8:09 | comment | added | lilysirius | Another thing feels awkward is 看小说、学外语和跟外国人聊天. Change 和 to 以及 is much better. This is phonetic. | |
| May 15, 2022 at 8:08 | comment | added | lilysirius | While 属于 is grammatical to add, it makes the sentence very unnatural. 试图 is better than 尽量. It is a still-going process from then. 了解 cannot be the predicate here; I don't know the term, but it's not "verbal" enough. 尽量去了解 solves the problem. | |
| May 14, 2022 at 23:33 | history | edited | Becky 李蓓♦ | CC BY-SA 4.0 |
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| May 14, 2022 at 23:20 | history | answered | Becky 李蓓♦ | CC BY-SA 4.0 |